The prediction of jump scare for me 4/10 --- for others it's might be 7/10
The suspension in-game 3/10
The biggest reason for me of the suspense and prediction was scored lower was because I couldn't understand Spanish. Understanding whoever is trying to scare or get you in horror scene and not be able speaking in player's/victim's language as all I heard was Spanish like it was gibberish to me because I don't understand. The game will become more frightening if I could understand what was said to me for my mind to wander and it would give me reasons to be scared or nervous for the jump scared to work on me. FYI, I do think Spanish is a beautiful language and it's shame I don't understand anything said to me when it's spoken to me. How about an English version of your game or English subtitles? I read your developer notes that you are working on that 52 days ago from today.
The audio just needs a clean up of having more a direct approach. As the cell rang, I purposely went in the opposite direction on the other end of the train. The audio is slightly lowered on the other end of the train. But bearly any audio difference when I approach the cell standing next to it.
The reflections were a very minimal or standard amount. The glass windows and the metal bars. I should be able to see my reflection as I don't see my reflection with clarity or at least blurry & know it's me as the in-game character. There is not enough lighting reflection on the seating's materials/texture. Go on a train or bus with the same or similar plastic seating. Use a flashlight or your cell's flashlight on the plastic seating or the sunlight as you'll see the seating will reflect off this type of material.
Add a bit more trash items inside the train. Add more graffiti as in Elementary or Middle School silly or love drawings or sayings like Jose & Breanna with a drawn heart around it on the seat or a randomly doodle from a kid or a message on the wall(s) like "a beware of" or "Never answer phones here" Or "GET OUT OR DIE!"
My Idea suggestion for this game:
How about before the big final jump scare, if the train stops at the same station again with all the lights off in the station beside the signs stay lit, like EXIT, Enter, The Station's Number Sign. The train at a full stop as some of the lights flicker in the train (one or two, but three is the max of flickering lights) and only one of the train's door slides open as the player approaches it. Then grey smoke/fog pour into the train for 8 secs as an ear-piercing scream and blood floods slowly creeping towards the player with a growl from of whatever going to jumpscare the player. The train door closed automatically as the player's surroundings act like everything seems to be normal & going to the next station into the dark train tunnel. As the moment the train moves slowly to leave. The Player saw a body that had slammed on the window(s) that spatters blood with grunt sound from the victim or heard bones snapped broken as gravity pulled the body down to the ground with a growl or evil sinister laugh afterward. And then you take it from there with your imagination.
This game gametime is very short, but very interesting and scary. This is my gameplay video,maybe you don't know what i say,but i hope you will like it. Thank for your creation,i hope all of you have nice day
I loved these types of games, were you have to constantly stay vigilant with your surroundings. However I ran into a bug where I could not progress, once getting the phone to trigger and then second after the phone. Other than that I had a lot of fun playing your game. I hope to see more from you. <3 Zombikittie
I liked the graphics and how "photo-realistic" the game looks but I got stuck in the train and didn't know how to progress.... if I could progress, that is.
It was ok, I though the jump scare at the end was a little cheap and having to find the phone was really annoying. The sound seemed to be coming from a spot in the carnage so I spent a lot of time hunting around for it because I thought it was hidden somewhere.
Jesus Christ you gave me a heart attack and literally made me cry a bit! :D Awesome atmosphere, graphics, sounds and everything else! Here's my little playthrough (polish language). Cheers!
I loved this experience, it wasn't "scary" per se -- but the slow creep of anxiety was very effective. I do wish more lore or information of the world could have existed -- hope to see more games from you!
Played this for a random free indie horror, and like it well enough, but i do have a bit of criticism at the end of the video, as well as a review of the game.
The game looks amazing, I love the graphics. There aren't any hints to point you in the right direction to go on, however. But it's still a game worth trying.
It was okay, however alot of the sound assets look like they have been taken from PT which i'm pretty sure is not free. However, as long as these are used in the right way to hone your game design knowledge them I am okay with this.
Graphics are gorgeous & well made & they look almost photorealistic. What is the plan for the full game?
Hello there creator. I played your game and i placed it on my channel.
That ending though... My god... That was pretty scary and my voice was almost done with talking after my scare. Anyway here is my gameplay of your game. ENJOY!!
Overall for a game made in 24 hours this was a good work. It has good sound quality and visuals. I do think finding out what you are supposed to do is too difficult, it doesn't push you in the right direction as much as I would like. I found myself wandering for far too long trying to move forward.
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never been on a subway cart for so long lol WHEN ARE WE STOPPING
The detail in the game 9/10
The game audio is 8/10
The visual effects 8/10
The lighting effects 9/10
The creepiness is 5/10
The prediction of jump scare for me 4/10 --- for others it's might be 7/10
The suspension in-game 3/10
The biggest reason for me of the suspense and prediction was scored lower was because I couldn't understand Spanish. Understanding whoever is trying to scare or get you in horror scene and not be able speaking in player's/victim's language as all I heard was Spanish like it was gibberish to me because I don't understand. The game will become more frightening if I could understand what was said to me for my mind to wander and it would give me reasons to be scared or nervous for the jump scared to work on me. FYI, I do think Spanish is a beautiful language and it's shame I don't understand anything said to me when it's spoken to me. How about an English version of your game or English subtitles? I read your developer notes that you are working on that 52 days ago from today.
The audio just needs a clean up of having more a direct approach. As the cell rang, I purposely went in the opposite direction on the other end of the train. The audio is slightly lowered on the other end of the train. But bearly any audio difference when I approach the cell standing next to it.
The reflections were a very minimal or standard amount. The glass windows and the metal bars. I should be able to see my reflection as I don't see my reflection with clarity or at least blurry & know it's me as the in-game character. There is not enough lighting reflection on the seating's materials/texture. Go on a train or bus with the same or similar plastic seating. Use a flashlight or your cell's flashlight on the plastic seating or the sunlight as you'll see the seating will reflect off this type of material.
Add a bit more trash items inside the train. Add more graffiti as in Elementary or Middle School silly or love drawings or sayings like Jose & Breanna with a drawn heart around it on the seat or a randomly doodle from a kid or a message on the wall(s) like "a beware of" or "Never answer phones here" Or "GET OUT OR DIE!"
My Idea suggestion for this game:
How about before the big final jump scare, if the train stops at the same station again with all the lights off in the station beside the signs stay lit, like EXIT, Enter, The Station's Number Sign. The train at a full stop as some of the lights flicker in the train (one or two, but three is the max of flickering lights) and only one of the train's door slides open as the player approaches it. Then grey smoke/fog pour into the train for 8 secs as an ear-piercing scream and blood floods slowly creeping towards the player with a growl from of whatever going to jumpscare the player. The train door closed automatically as the player's surroundings act like everything seems to be normal & going to the next station into the dark train tunnel. As the moment the train moves slowly to leave. The Player saw a body that had slammed on the window(s) that spatters blood with grunt sound from the victim or heard bones snapped broken as gravity pulled the body down to the ground with a growl or evil sinister laugh afterward. And then you take it from there with your imagination.
it is portuguese man................ spanish and portuguese are very different languages
This game gametime is very short, but very interesting and scary. This is my gameplay video,maybe you don't know what i say,but i hope you will like it. Thank for your creation,i hope all of you have nice day
I loved these types of games, were you have to constantly stay vigilant with your surroundings. However I ran into a bug where I could not progress, once getting the phone to trigger and then second after the phone. Other than that I had a lot of fun playing your game. I hope to see more from you. <3 Zombikittie
I liked the graphics and how "photo-realistic" the game looks but I got stuck in the train and didn't know how to progress.... if I could progress, that is.
Really loved the concept of this game.
Great job and much respect from Australia :) Here's me being the silly person I am :)
Ey, I played your game in my latest Itch.io Horror Games video! Jump to 0:06 to check it out!
TREMENDO! MUY BUENA LA TENSIÓN QUE GENERA!
Uno de los MEJORES SUSTOS que tuve!
Poblemas q eu tive com o jogo :
1.) A lore é muito parecido com PT (recomendo dar uma variada maior nas falas e na historia).
2.) A transição entre os vagões ta meio estranha (tem um bugzinho na hora de mudar de vagão, onde dá um glitch nos graficos)
só :)
Had fun with this! It would be really cool to see something bigger come out of this, but yeah it was quite nice!
It was ok, I though the jump scare at the end was a little cheap and having to find the phone was really annoying. The sound seemed to be coming from a spot in the carnage so I spent a lot of time hunting around for it because I thought it was hidden somewhere.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jKRuuUWi-FE
I had a blast with this game!!!
Espero que curtam minha gameplay, me diverti muito com esse jogo e o final, ah o final...
Fun little scary game!
link to my channel (opens in new tab) youtube.com/jonathick
Pretty neat little game. Wasn't expecting the ending though so that was a good something something!
Jesus Christ you gave me a heart attack and literally made me cry a bit! :D Awesome atmosphere, graphics, sounds and everything else! Here's my little playthrough (polish language). Cheers!
You. Nailed. The. Atmosphere.
I loved this experience, it wasn't "scary" per se -- but the slow creep of anxiety was very effective. I do wish more lore or information of the world could have existed -- hope to see more games from you!
unreal engine 4 city subway Train- modular fee content in market place but you did the best job on it
Played this for a random free indie horror, and like it well enough, but i do have a bit of criticism at the end of the video, as well as a review of the game.
The game looks really good,great atmosphere.
Here is a short video we made while playing:
Really great and terrifying experience for a game made in 24 hours! Really incredible!
10/10 game, so well made, absolutely terrifying with some of the best atmosphere I've ever experienced.
Is spookers.
The game looks amazing, I love the graphics. There aren't any hints to point you in the right direction to go on, however. But it's still a game worth trying.
Это было хорошо и весело
um jogo indie brasileiro, vou baixar pra conferir
It was okay, however alot of the sound assets look like they have been taken from PT which i'm pretty sure is not free. However, as long as these are used in the right way to hone your game design knowledge them I am okay with this.
Graphics are gorgeous & well made & they look almost photorealistic. What is the plan for the full game?
Thanks for the addition of English to the game, the atmosphere is overly creepy and unsettling, and that jumpscare took me by surprise.
Hello there creator. I played your game and i placed it on my channel.
That ending though... My god... That was pretty scary and my voice was almost done with talking after my scare. Anyway here is my gameplay of your game. ENJOY!!
I love this game! Keep up the great work :)
Hello! I'd love to offer my services to your team if possible, I can't find a way to contact you however I'm a pro voice actor and writer for over 20+ video games including survival horror games 'PROJECT NIGHTMARES' and 'Today is my Birthday' and more. https://www.igdb.com/pro/96 https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLDVT8emSZq4hUkQtsw93S5UpeDBz3plpE
I'd love to work with your team if possible; email me at bbwatts8792@gmail.com or contact me directly. :)
Played your game in an indie romp. Hope you enjoy it!
Your game start at 10:45
Really well made game. Visually it was stunning and the ending got me good. Feel free to check out my video on it
Loved the graphics in this. Great sound and environment.
Only problem is spending a bit too long wandering with no idea what to do. Overall though it was great for a 24 hour game!
This was a blast. I had to play through a second time cause I blinked the first time. Also full disclaimer, I fear-burp involuntarily...
Keep up the good work!
Tried out your game...
Overall for a game made in 24 hours this was a good work. It has good sound quality and visuals. I do think finding out what you are supposed to do is too difficult, it doesn't push you in the right direction as much as I would like. I found myself wandering for far too long trying to move forward.
This is the third game in the video
OMG !!!! i miss da end with the flying guy xD but here is my Gameplay Video